Collaborative Consideration: Group Edits On Class Work

Suggestions and Comments: Arnas’ Presentation

  • HOLY MOTHER OF RUN ON <– slide 4
  • switches between academic wording and more colloquial speech- make it more cohesive with consistent tone
  • change title- not related to content of slideshow
  • make it more multi-modal- there are a LOT of words
  • writing errors: run on sentences, open quotations, double negatives

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