Collaborative Consideration: Group Edits On Class Work

Suggestions and Comments: Arnas’ Presentation

  • HOLY MOTHER OF RUN ON <– slide 4
  • switches between academic wording and more colloquial speech- make it more cohesive with consistent tone
  • change title- not related to content of slideshow
  • make it more multi-modal- there are a LOT of words
  • writing errors: run on sentences, open quotations, double negatives

Primary Research: Objective vs. Subjective

What is Primary Research?
-Data you collect yourself
-Analysis of things or data that have been curated into a collection or archive

Objective vs. Subjective

-We as humans are born and raised to judge everything around us
-Objective is just the facts
-Subjective is drawing conclusions
-Objectivity is decided by the masses- group agreement
-Subjectivity is what we can assume based on the objective facts- easier to draw conclusions from visual rather than audible information